This month I have been thinking about good English sentence and paragraph structure. Non-native English speakers who are learning write in English will often think of what they want to say in their first language and then translate it. This generally results in a mess. The precise structure of the mess will depend on the rules of the student’s first language. The important thing is to teach the conventions of good English writing; but how?
Visualizing a problem helps to solve it. However there doesn’t seem to be a tool available today that can clearly visualize the various concerns writers have to deal with. A paragraph might contain 100 words, each of which relate to each other in some way. How do you visualize that clearly… not like this, anyway.
I did find some useful resources though. I discovered the Paramedic Method, through this blog post from helpscout.net. The Paramedic Method was devised by Richard Lanham and consists of these 6 steps:
- Highlight the prepositions.
- Highlight the “is” verb forms.
- Find the action. (Who is kicking whom?)
- Change the action into a simple active verb.
- Start fast—no slow windups.
- Read the passage out loud with emphasis and feeling.
This is good advice for anyone writing English. It’ll be particularly helpful in my classes in Spain where we need to clean up long strings of relative clauses. (For example, a sentence such as “On the way I met one of the workers from the company where I was going to do the interview that my friend got for me”. I would rewrite this as: “On the way I met a person from Company X, where my friend had recently got me an interview.”
I found a tool called Write Music which I like a lot. The idea is simple: to illustrate and visualize the rule that varying sentence length is important when writing. The creator of the tool, Titus Wormer, seems to be doing some interesting and well documented research.
I looked at a variety of open source tools for natural language processing. These provide good ways to tokenize a text and to identify the “part of speech” (noun, verb, adjective, adverb, etc.) but I didn’t yet find one that could analyze the types of clauses that are used. Which is a shame. My understanding of this is an area of English grammar is still quite weak and I was hoping my laptop might be able teach me by example but it seems not.
I found some other amazing natural language technologies too. Inform 7 continues to blow my mind whenever I look at it. Commercial services like IBM Watson can promise incredible things like analysing the sentiments and emotions expressed in a text, and even the relationships expressed between the subjects and objects. It’s been an interesting day of research!